Sunday, September 13, 2015

skillfully she shored up her lines of defense

                                                                             Attribution: Sumeet Maghe
Image: A Lioness in the Gir Forest (here)

Sunday Whirl given words:
face shore lines down ripe far itself 
drizzle heart birth sprout silhouette

given to the provocation of having
to face the inevitable was damning enough
skillfully she shored up her lines of defense

down to a trickle but ripe for a change
a far cry from the loss of resolve
in trying to assess the issue itself

a sense of loss persisted akin to standing
in a drizzle cold in the heart still not
nearer to getting a solution

birth of an idea to sprout out suddenly
seemed remote and was turning out to be a joke
not even as a silhouette in the distance

too much to struggle for
emotionally her patience was wearing thin
she decided to just dump him!

Brenda's hosting at Sunday Whirl Wordle #216 and
Mary's at PU's Poetry Pantry # 269

28 comments:

  1. haha well , i guess that's all she could've done

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  2. I guess patience finally wears thin.

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  3. The last line is perfect Hank - i wondered where the metaphor was leading - wise choice on her part maybe?

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  4. Yes, lionesses are the boss and in control.

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  5. wow, a predictable ending. i mean in regards to the theme

    well penned

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  6. Very clever, Hank. As I began reading I thought 'animal' and as I came to the ending I realized ....... well, let's say I enjoyed the twist your ending took.

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  7. The closing lines just blew me away..! What an incredible write :D

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  8. When in control the power to dump sure comes up haha

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  9. One can only take so much. Thank goodness for the boot...

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  10. The best course of action is to dump them when it gets too nerve racking

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  11. ha - patience can only last for so long, the question is how long must one wait before moving on?

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  12. Emotionally her patience was wearing thin... I reckon you have met my wife? Oh wait, let me read that surprise ending again...

    Oh I hope not.

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  13. Ha! Perfect ending. :)

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  14. They say "Patience is a virtue". this proved that point.
    Well written Hank.
    Yvonne.

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  15. Sometimes the excuses we make to hold on aren't worth it--we're already gone.

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  16. Cool twist at the end, it sounded much too exhausting to do anything else. Good one, Hank!

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  17. 'too much to struggle for
    emotionally her patience was wearing thin
    she decided to just dump him!'

    Been there...much easier in the end...saves our hearts and souls and minds....

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  18. I wonder if it is pride or wisdom that finally allows us to let go.

    Elizabeth

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  19. Dump him? The King of the Beasts will be surprised.

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  20. Ha! Very cool. I guess even lionesses have their limits. I enjoyed this!

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  21. Great piece! From the title to the last line!

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  22. i can tell it's so easy but then again one has sympathy and compassion for a broken heart. loved it!!

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  23. Good call if he's just dicking around.

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