Saturday, February 21, 2015

Gateway to Heaven

                                                                               Attribution: Diego Delso (CC-BY-SA)
Image: Balcón del Mediterráneo, Benidorm, Spain (here)

A Shadorma
A non-rhyming form of 3-5-3-3-7-5 syllables

Balcony
or viewing platform
glimse of wealth
faraway
opens opportunities
to those who are brave

A Fibonacci
with syllable count of 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13…

Steps
kind
dainty
friendly ones
Gateway to Heaven
Care to seek forgiveness before
doors closed for born-again sinners seeking redemption?

For Georgia's hosting at MLMM BJ's
Shadorma and Beyond - fibonacci

7 comments:

  1. Interesting forms, I'll have to try my hand at them!

    ReplyDelete
  2. ha. i will def ask forgiveness first, please...smiles.

    depends on what the wealth is....is that a submarine out there in the water?

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Could not make out Brian! There are no other descriptions on the pic.

      Hank

      Delete
  3. Wealth and health I'd go for. As for sinning, it depends lol

    ReplyDelete
  4. Oh dear I have until Easter to do "mes Pâques" and ask for forgiveness.

    ReplyDelete
  5. So interesting and what a beautiful picture?

    ReplyDelete
  6. Very nice! Hope those doors don't close though.

    ReplyDelete